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Critique my design plan please!

7 years ago
last modified: 7 years ago

What do you think? Open to any suggestions you might have, or additions that you think would look good!

Second picture is the space. Walls will be painted white.... First picture is what I plan to buy.



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  • 7 years ago

    And thanks jmm1837! The bed is going to be on a very low bed frame without a headboard.

  • 7 years ago

    Gavin what rooms are we doing? I see end tables, and dining chairs but also coffee table and beds? Is this an entire home? Are you going for a monochromatic color scheme or are there colors you want to incorporate into the plan? Is there a sofa you have in mind to go with the coffee table? Are you going for a modern farmhouse vibe?

  • 7 years ago

    This is all for my bedroom. Looking to stick with the colors above for the most part, green, black, grey etc

  • PRO
    7 years ago

    Some inspirations.

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  • 7 years ago

    Gavin, I believe on your previous post when I tried to get you to raise your TV, I also suggested you start a bedroom ideabook. There are 83,154 modern bedrooms on Houzz and I'll bet one of them is yours. Maybe it's this one?

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    It's easier to choose pieces when you can see how they all work together.

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  • 7 years ago

    Thank you!

  • 7 years ago

    How big is this space? What you can fit in comfortably depends on the size of the room and the placement of doors and windows.


    I assume you have a good sized walk-in closet with drawers: otherwise, you'll need a tallboy or dresser or something in addition to nightstands. And do you really need a coffee table?



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    Prolly, but let's confirm...Is this a guy-space bedroom? This matters, IMO.

    How big is it, length by width?

    IMO, since this is a bedroom, first shop for the bed. Make sure the bed will give you a good night's sleep and whatever else you have in mind. What size? Adjustable frame? Do you need storage underneath? How tall will the bed be?

    Do you like to read in bed? That means a bed light needs to be good for reading, and it might need to be over your shoulder. You might want the kind of headboard that has a bookcase behind the head?

    Do you have night time needs like a CPAP or 5 alarm clocks or a mass of devices needing recharging or ummm "toys"? The bedside tables and cubbies should be planned accordingly.

    Then sketch space. Are there windows? Do you want your bed to face windows? How about a TV?

    How big? Where are the closets? If none, how are planning to keep your clothes?

    Since you're going to paint the walls, consider outlining possible furniture on the current walls. Then post photos!

    How tall are the ceilings?

    Do the accessories like art, curtains, and linens LAST.


    Plants LAST LAST. Get real ones. Only if you need plants.

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  • 7 years ago

    Now that you’ve started a thread we get to watch, right? Please?

  • 7 years ago

    Haha I'll definitely post the finished product.

  • 7 years ago

    Yeah I have a walk in. The coffee table is just for my TV.

  • PRO
    7 years ago

    I wouldn’t use a coffee table for a TV. If you plan to watch it from bed it is better to have it more at eye level.

  • 7 years ago

    Mount the TV on the wall opposite the bed. You need the floor space for other stuff...

  • 7 years ago

    Flo upthread he said it was going to be a very low profile bed. Does that change your opinion?

  • 7 years ago
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    Do you use a laptop in bed? You might want a table on wheels that swings over the bed?

    So far, we've got a whole "bed as entertainment center" thing going, lol.




  • 7 years ago

    A coffee table is too low for a TV. even If your mattress is on the ground when you’re lying down the TV needs to be higher than you and usually by a lot. Really you need to have your bed in place so you can see where your optimal viewing level will be but generally I’m a bedroom higher up on a wall is the best place.

  • 7 years ago
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    Is there a headboard? If not,add one. Overall, the combo of items you are planning to buy look flat,same repeating metal rectangle on both tables,lamp & desk is too match-y, it bugs me. So does the lack of textures. I quite like the nightstands but would find a more interesting lamp. Why are you set on the coffee table for the TV. Don't you need storage? Maybe consider a rug with a more distinct repeating geo pattern and better quality. The throw pillows add little to the mix. I do like the natural wood elements,the dark metal, and the green. Just think you need some star elements.

    Art-wise. Consider fewer,bigger,better, and more personal pieces. A combo of slim black frames and natural wood frames is spot on,though.

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    7 years ago

    Even with a bed at say 14" with mattress above floor, you still need the TV higher for ease of viewing. Needs to be measured when you have the bed in place and can actually test your habits and see what is best for your situation. But I would mount on wall probably and place a nice sleek console under it or mounted on wall under it.

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  • 7 years ago
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    Oooh, I like that Atlanta Beltline loft. It takes Gavin's preference for toned-down solids to a whole new level of spunk. That rug is spectacular. This look can be done on a low budget, too, IMO, from Ikea or somewhere.

    Since your walls will be white, you'd have to have a different way to create the effect of that rich grey wall (someone else will be better at advising on this), but wow.

    Note, even, the plant!

  • 7 years ago

    Woo! Some guess! That Atlanta Beltline rug is from Ikea:




  • 7 years ago
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    Thanks Holly! Good advice. I don't need the storage, I can't mount anything heavy like that on the walls, and I'm looking for something very cheap. Now that I look at the lamps I agree with you. What are your thoughts on these? Also a throw blanket for the bed?


    I appreciate all the input.







  • 7 years ago
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    I think they’re both great, but I like the second lamp. I agree a break from the harsh lines is nice, but I still like it minimal :) As for the throw, I think that could be a great place for color!

  • 7 years ago

    If the lamp is for the bed on a night table, it needs to be tall enough to shine line on whatever you're reading in bed. I suspect that both of those ^ are too short for that purpose. Make sure that the top of the nightstands is level with the top of the mattress, and then the bottom of the lampshade should be level with your chin when you're sitting in bed reading.

    I'd pick a taller version of the first one.

    Something like these, from CB2 and All Modern


    , would add some much needed texture and subtle pattern, assuming the height works out.






  • 7 years ago

    Beckysharp is right on the height of the lamps. I would hold off on those till you get your bed and nightstands set up, then measure to see what height you need. You might even want to consider something adjustable.

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  • 7 years ago
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    I would hold off on those till you get your bed and nightstands set up, then measure to see what height you need.

    +1 on this.

  • 7 years ago

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  • 7 years ago

    Thanks for the suggestions becky! Love the first lamp. Might change the shade to either grey, green, or black

  • 7 years ago

    Gavin, i admire your willingness to learn. How much is that table (let us try and find a cheaper equally stylish option... so need to know size of your TV) and what size rug do you need? Rugs are relatively inexpensive in these day of ebay and etsy and all the online sellers. Glad to see this thread is now getting focused on the size/scale of items. Makes all the difference both in the look and the comfort in any space. Hurray for Becky for getting it there!

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  • 7 years ago

    I like that lamp Grover suggested for your desk. It's minimally invasive leaving a lot of surface area work space.

  • 7 years ago

    Thanks holly! The table is about $125 and the tv is 42". I'm not sure on the rug, but the room is pretty big.


    I made some changes below. And also did a terrible job photoshopping everything into one picture. Any better? What would you change. (the coffee table would be on the other wall with my tv on it.





  • 7 years ago

    Me too molly! A little bit more than I want to spend though : /

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    Woah, you are one quick study. Do you want the rug so strongly graphic? Would look great but just think about it.

    One consideration: how far will it be from the end of your bed to the TV wall? And how deep is the table? https://www.allmodern.com/furniture/pdp/gimetri-tv-stand-for-tvs-up-to-65-th4856.html


    And wanted you to see this, https://www.wayfair.com/furniture/pdp/george-oliver-wigington-tv-stand-for-tvs-up-to-60-golv3670.html comes smaller if you prefer. https://www.wayfair.com/furniture/pdp/george-oliver-wigington-tv-stand-for-tvs-up-to-48-golv3669.html But it is low,long and lean and helps wrangle cords and sound bars/speakers.

    edit to add: I give up on trying to post that pic It is the fourth thumbnail under the first link

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  • 7 years ago

    Oh wow! Thanks holly. I actually love that TV stand... do you think that color would look strange with the oak end table, black desk, and grey floors?


    The rug I'm on the fence about. And maybe 5-6 feet from the end of my bed

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    No, I think the stand would be fine. Adds a little MCMness. Just make sure to check around for the best price.


    I think your original vision for a more muted rug is better because you just don't seem to want a high contrast space. Good news is similar rugs, like the one in the thumbnail, more quiet stripes abound. So do many others. Now this am I saw your first rug looking good in a room on a different Houzz thread... https://www.houzz.com/discussions/5749969/advice-on-built-in-wood-color-and-wall-for-open-concept-areathe Issue is how much rug will show in your room? And until you are in the space, hard to know. When you are in the space along with the bed, you can take a pic and try rugs on virtually...sometimes it is a surprise to me which ones I end up liking best.

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  • 7 years ago
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    Velvet curtains for $60 also from HD.

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  • 7 years ago

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  • 7 years ago
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    Thank you tracy! Definitely see how it was too match-y match-y before. Love those curtains too. What do you this of this TV stand and rug? Is the grey too much? I'm just wondering if there are too many different wood tones in the second one... but I think I'm leaning towards that one now





  • 7 years ago

    Liking the direction this is going.

  • 7 years ago

    I agree with you on too many different wood tones. Do you have a favorite of the tones in your pictures?

  • 7 years ago

    Hey molly! Yeah, I'm definitely a fan of the light oak color

  • 7 years ago

    https://www.homedepot.com/p/Elrene-Victoria-Velvet-Room-Darkening-Window-Curtain-026865796278/302749814

    Here is a link to the curtains. As for mixing colors, a pro is better suited to give you that answer, just make sure you like whatever you get! But you are off to a great start.

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  • 7 years ago

    Here’s one from Wayfair. I posted the review because he talks about the color.

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  • 7 years ago

    This is what I got so far. What do you all think?



  • 7 years ago

    I like it, I’m just worried about the tv stand being too low when you are laying down. When do you get in the apartment?

  • 7 years ago

    Yeahhh might be a little low Ellen. And I get it in about 2 weeks.

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    https://www.wayfair.com/decor-pillows/pdp/birch-lane-heritage-cairo-solid-blackout-thermal-rod-pocket-curtain-panels-w000920064.html?piid=1128836228%2C1128836232 Many colours, what size do you need? (i would stick with a very light shade because the room size is 12 by 15,keep the walls expanded...& use the back tabs if they exist...otherwise,rings and rod) Have you purchased any of the linens or pillows yet?

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  • 7 years ago

    I like the direction you're headed in. You can easily mix wood tones, especially if they're spread throughout the room.

  • 7 years ago

    Thanks Katin! Initially I was apprehensive but the varying wood tones are starting to grow on me.

  • 7 years ago

    If you order the lower tv stand and it turns out to be too low can you use it in the living room? That is such a good price. And if you want to blend in the different wood tones maybe a different rug would help? This one is also from HD. I wouldn’t go with gray curtains with this one but maybe a taupe.

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