Bay windows might overpower the front a bit. Maybe some more landscaping and definitely ditch the awnings in my opinion.

No bay’s , not fond of the white trim/fascia/ gutters. Something more earth toned, the roof seems to clash as well.

Photos are so deceiving because they compress space. It's hard to tell how much space you have in your frontyard . Enough to add a small porch ? Can one of your windows be turned into a door for a front entrance ? I love these ideas from Houzz below. If these won't work you might consider adding a pergola ( like the white one in the first photo below ) over a ground-level deck ( or poured concrete slab ) to at least give your home more dimension. It would appear to be a porch and could be attached to your house . The brick could be painted to match your new siding as well.

No retaining wall. There's no need for one.

Landscape features that look contrived -- like a retaining wall when there is no need for one -- do not improve appearance.

Return to where the first picture taken and add what's right and left of the house. (Overlap slightly with the first picture.) In addition to shrubs as part of the landscaping, you need trees in order to make the house seem connected to the surroundings. Got to show the spaces where they might go, which is right and left of the house, not directly in front.